TWILIGHT ECLIPSE
The mind in ruins
The siren purged and left the sinsThe mind in ruins
Gathering these grains of sand
On a distant beach with the vulkanised hand
Leeches sucking on sour blood
Knee deep in lukewarm mud
The dirt, the rage, the madness
Lurking with a firefly in the darkness
Bugs are squashed and so was this
The blind see no color,
The blind see no venitian masks
White eyes and tripping things
Broken glass under bare feet cries
This is the wrathful emancipation
Conflict and destruction
Leaves the intact rock
Genuinely imperfect sculpture
Created from earths forceful ruptures
It is unfinished
It is not done
The darkest eclipse in the twilight's sun
Τι θέλει να πεί ο ποιητής;
9 σχόλια:
Poli Kalo!
Dyskolo, opois to egrapse einai sigoura xameos stis skepseis tou.
Eustoxh h kritikh sthn koinwnia, h apopsh thn alh8eia opws kai to deytero meros pou deixnei thn synexomenh prospa8eia, thn synexh anadiamorfwsh kai telika thn anagegennhsh mesa ap'to skotadi.....
anwnume no2... pragmatika bravo gi ayto pou evgales apo to poihma! egw oses fores kai na to diavasw anarwtiemai ti na shmainei arage..
...Nomizo meta apo afto, seira exei to "I am" kai to "Scream" ! ...ti na po... SE THAVMAZO !! sunexise na grapheis Mr Rudyard Kipling No2!
;-)
"You deserve stardust from the furthest star..."
g opion to egrapse...
skepseis sthn wra ths viologias etc eprepe na to lene, emena d maresei toso.... paraeinai... apokalyptiko... Oso g ton pio prosfato anwnymo, ton stixo pou ton vrikes? oso to pou apey8yetai, se kanenan/kamia eidika, e3artatai apto ti shmainei ston ka8ena....e3alloy eprepe na eixe kaei to sygekrimeno...
Oloi paraeinai eugenikoi omws g kati to toso erasitexniko kai dh8en omorfo... e3ypnoi stixoi alla pou einai to nohma? an k auta pou eipe o anwnymos #2 eixan kapoia alh8eia mesa tous
epeidh me trwei h periegia...
eno, poios eisai?
erasitexniko einai sigoura, aytos pou to egrapse dn einai poihths!
par'ola ayta dn xreiazetai na eisai toso aysthros stn krish sou..exallou opws eipes o ka8enas katalavainei ayto pou 8elei g tn eauto tou.
sigoura dn milame g aristourghma alla g ay8ormhth kai filotimh prospa8eia.
Mr Eno,
eduposiazomai apo tin idea su na sxoliaseis toso afstira to diko su poihma...ligoi to kanun afto! Omws an pragmatika pisteveis pos afto pu egrapses den exei noima, tote giati to egrapses? to poiima afto me taxidepse kai me prosgeiwnei apotoma to sxolio su! pistepse perissotero sti duleia su kai se SENA! Alliws.. tha parw pisw to Mr Rudyard Kipling No2!!!
kaneis den eipe pote oti den eixe nohma... exei k paraexei...
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